When You Look At Me Poem by totally disturbed

When You Look At Me

Rating: 5.0


I never thought much about destiny
Until the night you looked at me.
The attraction you try hard not to see
Shows everytime you look at me.
I've had these feelings for so very long
Two years now I need to know.
One day I hope you'll finally see
That you and I are meant to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Isabel Oropeza 27 March 2009

I liked it. 10 out of 10. Perhaps you'd like my poems 'Love to Start' and 'Shattered Dreams' they somewhat remind me of this poem. All the very best! Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

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Kris Smith 18 December 2008

They say that love is blind, but I dont believe that only people 10 +++ Chris

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Saint Cynosure 03 July 2008

Very good I give it a 10...

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