Treasure Island

Gordon D Wilkinson

(Oxford - England)

When you love


When tears roll across your cheeks
This heart bleeds a little
As your eyes close in pain
It dies a little
If it detects your despair
Into two pieces, it breaks
Never to be whole whilst you’re afflicted
So smile a little more
Wipe away those tears
Give me your pain to bear
Let me carry your cross of despair
Only then can I too heal

Submitted: Sunday, August 02, 2009

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (8/13/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    This is very moving Gorden..
    Hey remember when I first came here, you said,
    woman can make men look like headless chicken running every where blah! ! ! !

    this is good..very touching and moving.. not like your fun and witty ones..
    hey It is kinda incongruous when you write such one.....

    cheers
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (8/2/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    A cry from the heart Gordon
    - - and tenderly written - -an appealing love poem - - 10 + + from Fay.... (Report) Reply

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