When You Love Someone Poem by shilpa Poetess
When You Love Someone
When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.
Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.
You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.
He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.
One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.
He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.
You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.
It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock, You heard the news and it wasn't a shock. You knew this was going to happen soon, As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.... schock at failure but good description of love and its spell boundd efect.. i love it...10 read mine 'Cry not' o.mother, papa do u know and papa you too and dear sun
touching and strong emotive lines as so often.... saturday evenings and nights...bare thye fangs and so much pain lies around amid the giggles and the thumping beats.. beautiful lines cheers
marvelous.. wonderful peice thts how a pain should take form of words...
Fine rhyme/rhythm fine poetry! pain also painted beautifully! 10+
A sweet poem.......... simple words and deep meaning. keep it up
Hi Shilpa, on a Saturday night, you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon. How calm... All your love, passion, obsession……. poured in tears.... A poem like a gorgeous river... nobody could notice whether it is weeping or smiling.. lovely poem.. lovely feelings.. coooool.. and freezing... chilly pain with sugary toppings.. nice.... Jaleel
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:51:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
nice flow of expression! ! ! ! ! ! !