Oil,
Metal,
Cold as ice.
Rope,
Tight,
Burning my skin.
Pills,
Swallow,
Fade to black.
Water,
Air,
Lungs are burning.
Roof,
Sidewalk,
Falling falling falling.
Cars,
Road,
Honking screeching swerving.
Trigger,
Bang,
Through my head.
Noose,
Tightening,
I can't breathe.
Coma,
Darkness,
Put me down.
Bubbles,
Sinking,
Blurry light above.
Blur,
Screams,
Then sudden dark.
Asphalt,
Blood,
Worried faces everywhere.
Blur,
Dark,
Conscious then dark.
Focus,
Unfocus,
Slipping away again.
Light,
Dark,
Flashes of faces.
Blink,
Sleep,
Muffled voices near.
Fade,
Black,
It's finally over.
Coma darkness put me down......makes this poem entirely wonderful composition. Nice one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good