Existence morphs into a more perfect experience
When you are inside your lover.
Troubles vanish
Time slows down
Sensations are heightened
Spirits soar
Ecstasy approaches
And you know that joy's rapture will take you when ecstasy arrives.
Here's the thing few have discovered
And I want to share it with you,
The thing that transcends the most,
There's no better event
No better by far,
Is laughter.
Ah, to feel laughter from the inside out,
When you are inside your lover.
i love how this doesn't read crudely, but easily. wonderful poem <3 10
This is an exhilarating read.... Very creative too... Loved reading this one... not a dull moment at all in this piece... good..10++ cheers shan
Love your creative thoughts process and your unforgettable writing. You seem to do full justice to whatever you choose to write about. As well befits a Knight. (smile)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This was interesting, an angle of the topic that you only consider when you're actually there, involved in the moment! Wonderfully written and expressed.