Whim Poem by shimon weinroth

Whim

Rating: 5.0


changed my mind, no law against change,
an impulse, of the moment, whim of
fleeting feeling, brushed and swallowed
by another of no less import

able, to have more than one, twins, triplets
dancing to the same tune of wanting,
not displacing nor cancelling another
living together in disharmony

rhyme of multiple impulses,
what a nervous system that would be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 10 May 2007

righto. rhyming poetry is on its way out. Strong stream/word-weaving around a central fulcrum. care, sjg

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