shimon weinroth

A Grain Of Salt And More - Poem by shimon weinroth

the other me slithers out of
peep holes, cracks and crannies
slides and spreads, rolls and multiplies
filling the here and vast beyond

rides the golden chariots,
glides on the wings of fantasy
begetting dreams of dreams,
floating on clouds wrapped and cloaked

shedding my skin, dropping my leaves
hung up to dry,
dominated by lack of means,
I shrink wither and recline

by moods eluding and flirtatious
devoid of trauma, drama and catharsis
indulge myself
into realms of there

sometimes I can be followed,
pride is of no use
guilt and blushing have no place,
I am free, of electronics too

on a vacation, from some of myself

Comments about A Grain Of Salt And More by shimon weinroth

  • Freshman - 956 Points Indira Renganathan (10/30/2008 1:34:00 AM)

    Very good presentation of a vacation..interesting (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/25/2008 9:12:00 AM)

    salt only...vacation from 'pepper and sweet'...good theme...good presentation, Shimon 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,366 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/24/2008 11:04:00 PM)

    Sterling imagework....mellifluous construction...Solid crafting...liked this much...

    ** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimzy Sue (10/24/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    'on a vacation, from some of myself'
    very beautiful sentence and amazing poem...
    Loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (10/23/2008 9:15:00 AM)

    on a vacation from some of you; yes, Shimon, that's just beautiful; let it all slither off and we'll have you well rested at the end of the vacation. and we'll take you with a grain of salt, AND MORE. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/21/2008 9:35:00 AM)

    An excellent poem with diverse taste.
    10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,454 Points Ric S. Bastasa (10/19/2008 7:52:00 PM)

    fantastic last lines.. wonderfully written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (10/16/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    a nice poem
    an unusual theme
    with deep meaning
    +++10 anjali (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 17, 2008

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