A Grain Of Salt And More Poem by shimon weinroth

A Grain Of Salt And More

Rating: 5.0


the other me slithers out of
peep holes, cracks and crannies
slides and spreads, rolls and multiplies
filling the here and vast beyond

rides the golden chariots,
glides on the wings of fantasy
begetting dreams of dreams,
floating on clouds wrapped and cloaked

shedding my skin, dropping my leaves
hung up to dry,
dominated by lack of means,
I shrink wither and recline

by moods eluding and flirtatious
devoid of trauma, drama and catharsis
indulge myself
into realms of there

sometimes I can be followed,
pride is of no use
guilt and blushing have no place,
I am free, of electronics too

on a vacation, from some of myself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 16 October 2008

a nice poem an unusual theme with deep meaning +++10 anjali

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Ric Bastasa 19 October 2008

fantastic last lines.. wonderfully written.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

An excellent poem with diverse taste. 10 for it.

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Indira Renganathan 30 October 2008

Very good presentation of a vacation..interesting

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2008

salt only...vacation from 'pepper and sweet'...good theme...good presentation, Shimon 10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 October 2008

Sterling imagework....mellifluous construction...Solid crafting...liked this much... fjr **

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Mimzy Sue 24 October 2008

'on a vacation, from some of myself' very beautiful sentence and amazing poem... Loved it...

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Mark Nwagwu 23 October 2008

on a vacation from some of you; yes, Shimon, that's just beautiful; let it all slither off and we'll have you well rested at the end of the vacation. and we'll take you with a grain of salt, AND MORE.

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