Maria Cherneva


Whisper


Cold nights,
lost fights
and the only whisper -
"I love you"

Your hand on mine,
your lips on mine,
your whisper
"I love you"

Your painful eyes,
your crying eyes
blue, begging, whispering
"I love you"

A tear falls down my face
as I gasp for air in your embrace
when you whisper
"I love you"

Submitted: Sunday, June 10, 2012

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wrote this in art class after the teacher yelled at me for about 30 minutes and I didn't have what to do... it's inspired by Castle & Beckett

Comments about this poem (Whisper by Maria Cherneva )

  • Rookie - 72 Points Guess Who (6/10/2012 1:36:00 PM)

    Nicely written and very meaningful i liked it
    Good luck with your future poems
    Guess Who (Report) Reply

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