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Who I am!

I climb rocks out of anger,
sit at the top just to feel the wind.

Dive off boats,
just to get to that cliff.
I jump without fear,
I fly with a smile.

I grab everything I want,
I will beat you if you
taunt.

I'm not afraid of life,
I'm not afraid of death..

The only thing that scares me,
is myself.
I look in the mirror,
disgusted.

my inner doubt.
BUSTED!
I say to myself,
you can never be loved.
That little girl inside,
she's sent from above.

A piece of flesh,
I just want to destroy.
all of this.
just because of a boy.

The minute you get to see the real me,
I'm off.
I have to be free.

Do your worst,
give me the cliffs.
Listening to ballet,
I can dance like a drift.

Put jazz in my ear to unfold.
I can sing to your soul.
Put love in my face,
go away.
DISGRACE!

Submitted: Thursday, July 21, 2011
Edited: Thursday, July 21, 2011


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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (7/21/2011 12:51:00 AM)

    Great poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has something that makes it superb.
    I like and rate it 10.
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.
    Thanks in advance.
    Warm regards
    Akmal

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