akram saqib

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Who Is Our Enemy? - Poem by akram saqib

Satan and his colleagues
Making many many leagues
Pursue humans to create
A dubious, vicious debate
Produce such passions
Divided men into nations
Embossed a sense of pride
On the human hearts dried

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Who Is Our Enemy? by akram saqib

  • Chinedu Dike (10/7/2014 6:19:00 AM)

    A well articulated piece written with insight. Satan is indeed the greatest enemy of man. Lovely. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2009 5:27:00 AM)

    Divided men into nations
    Embossed a sense of pride
    On the human hearts dried.that's the great idea. hey are the one wrong feeling creators.... yes they should be ousted first from us...very good poem....10

    read mineblood all over...go back.... you go back (Report) Reply

  • Shams Tahir (8/26/2009 5:22:00 AM)

    it is the man not satan that is our enemy, he just incites us to do wrong, really great expression saqib (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury Sarwar Chowdhury (8/22/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    Bravo! ! another fine piece!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Surya . (8/19/2009 9:32:00 AM)

    sure it is a satan, s job. but the angels are more. let us overpower the satans.
    nice poem
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 4, 2014


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