Whole Poem by RAJ VIKRAM

Whole

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Can you move away
can you vanish
from these precincts
where our emotions
lie tangled like a web.

They are so even and
resemble each other
and are beyond compare.
Strive not to separate them
and move ahead alone.

We are beings united
uniquely by ways of
destiny in manners
and matters that defy
comprehension.

Aren't you aware enough
that it is beyond you
to mull severing from me
though several thoughts
may sow seeds of confusion.

Know it once and for all
kneel before our emotions
look with awe at the tangled
commonality of our emotions
and find us as a whole here forever.

Tuesday, May 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 17 May 2016

Emotions tangled so beautifully - - - - Awesome write! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Raj Vikram 20 June 2016

Thanks a lot respected madam

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Raj Vikram 20 June 2016

Thank you respected madam

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