Why Poem by Dimond Cross

Why

Rating: 4.3


I want to cry, I want die, Why? I want to cut, I want to rip out someones guts. I'm broken and someone has taken my most important part...my heart. I don't want to die. I don't want my heart to fly. All I needed to ask of you was...why?

Thursday, May 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 18 January 2016

This is a strong poem of emotions. strong realistic metaphor.

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Howard Savage 02 January 2016

fight those emotions and you will overcome the whys.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 October 2015

Great experiences of life especially when we are young lingers in our memory and it will go on and on. that is life. wonderfully written. thank you very much. tony

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Allotey Abossey 30 June 2015

Situations happen, some are to make us better people for the future.. We have to take advantage of that and not to allow hurts deprive us of that privilege...we may no get answers to certain questions, just obvious what the answer is... I think it has also made you a better poet. Stay blessed.

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Neenah, wisconsin, usa
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