Why! I Still Miss Her Poem by jurgen donald

Why! I Still Miss Her

Rating: 5.0


Running at pace with sadness and pain,
you gave me so much to hold onto,
even when the cruel world chose to take you from me,
all my last days has grown into coldness and self blame.
you fought with me when i was down and weak,
you went into my heart with care and love yet
death came and i was unable to stand for you.
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Monday, December 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 November 2019

A passionate and concise tale of irreplaceable lost told in eloquent finesse. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Jurgen.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 03 February 2017

Sad and deep. Thanks for sharing.

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Annette Aitken 20 December 2016

Jurgen this is such a heartfelt write, you can feel the pain withun your words, very sad indeed, very nicely penned. Annette

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