Why Is It U Like Me? Poem by Delwen Doyle

Why Is It U Like Me?

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Why is it U like me?
i do not know.
My chapped lips?
My wide hips?
My sweaty palms?
Your gorgeous face
makes mine blush
When you say such sweet words -
i don't understand U.
i'm square and care
about the nerdiest of things
Ur hip, & cool,
& make my heart sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 06 May 2008

Lots of crispy sweetness here, You have a remarkable approach to writing..your flow of words and imagery is of brilliance..great stuff! ! ! ! best wishes Jon

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David Desantis 05 May 2008

heheh...i really like, very interesting, and i love the square reference. Really cool, I'm starting to dig your stuff alot, glad i found ya.

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Frank Cannon 05 May 2008

Cos U is U on the inside too Dat is why he so likes you.... Crisp and concise. Nice one.

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