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Why not live; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; again; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;


one day at a time, it was slow death
life when squeezed out
can never be reloaded
paste out of a tube like
one day at a time, it was slow death
pebbles small tiny pebbles
white black sepia some grey
time piece, is broken in many
one day at a time, it was slow poison
my dreams eclipsed faded
rainbows show fire then
catch fireflies fill colours in eyes
one day at a time why not live....again..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Submitted: Monday, April 21, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, April 22, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Why not live; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; again; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; by trinity aana )

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (9/24/2008 4:01:00 AM)

    dreams never fade...they give us a reson to live...
    a reason to hope for...

    never let ur dreams fade...

    someday god will surely answer...

    really a nice poem...
    realistic to the core... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (4/23/2008 12:14:00 PM)

    Death, slow death, life, and then living again all explain different stances of life.....the worst is slow death...your expression is genuine and sensitive, , , liked reading it. (Report) Reply

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