Wind Poem by Mikoto

Wind

Rating: 4.7


Like the leaf.
Do you live?
You are very flexible.
But, I will advise one to you.
'I hope
the wind that shakes you is you.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Short poem, but a true spectre of the intensity of life.

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Melissa Broomhead 27 June 2006

your poems are short yet beautiful wich shows its not quantity that counts its quality that will win in most things including life write not 50 poems with little value at all but 1 that has the most value of all

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Nagamuthu Osho 10 September 2005

Hail! Poet! Most simple and subtle rhymes, flow with gush and pervading, profusing philosophy. The awareness of conscious with more meditative and intutive becomes more and more glory in your Poems. God Bless you, Yours sincerely, N.karthikeyan Osho

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Aashish Ameya 29 August 2005

simply beautiful.keep writing....

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