Smoky Hoss

Silver Star - 3,395 Points (01 may 1962 / U.S.A.)

Winter Coming - Poem by Smoky Hoss

a smokestack behind
rows of trees
turning
with the crisp autumn breeze;
rising far above
the steam furled air
are colors of fall
showing they are going, somewhere -

a bird
on the wing
southbound...
in its backwards spring -

past clouds
building snow,
summer can't wait
it just has to go -

Venus dances in the west
Big-Dipper scoops the Milky-Way,
soon gray clouds will block them all
as night takes over day -

so very still is the silent
out-beyond
that freezes the soul
of the old fishing pond -

there's not a sound
nor even one birdsong
now that the warm wind of summer
is long gone;
with what is coming
and what has went
natures glorious bounty
is once again fully spent -


Comments about Winter Coming by Smoky Hoss

  • Rookie - 337 Points Dee Corpolongo (11/12/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    I love Nature and Seasons and the beauty of it all. Wonderful descriptions and words here and felt. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 613 Points Lawerence Mize (11/12/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    Wonderfully written poem Smoky. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Lawerence Mize (11/12/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Wonderfully written poem on the changing of the seasons Smoky. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,231 Points Valerie Dohren (11/4/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    Excellent Smoky, Winter is surely here now and your poem paints a beautiful picture do the season. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,965 Points Noreen Carden (11/4/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    Hey Smoky a wonderful poem you paint a lovely picture of the departing season and the one coming into being
    Beautifully written well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, November 4, 2013


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