Winter Devil Poem by Linda Galvin

Winter Devil



His hoary fingers, misery spreads,
In a landscape dull and dreary;
Cruelly blackening autumnal beds.

Blustering breaths and sighs, so weary,
Tired of disturbing discarded mounds,
Once gold and russet, now bleak and eerie.

A veil of tears; in sadness pounds
His fists on the swollen earth; till snap,
The iron vane swings; its warning sounds…

Silence! Then he shakes his frozen cap,
And drop by drop his children fall,
Whirling and tumbling, a crystalline trap.

World undinted; in purity to enthral,
A garden of Eden in perfection appears;
Yet devilish Winter in a slow, sly crawl

Strikes back; a hobnail boot smears,
And blurs the ground as men stride out,
And women cry for the world and its cares.

Yet, softly, softly, dismissing all doubt;
A hope springs up in verdant robe,
Which cloaks the earth in mien devout.

The rising sun beams on the globe
Dispelling the gloom of Winter’s despair
Disturbing minds, each heart to probe

Life in abundance for all to share

Sunday, May 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written following a challenge that my son-in-law Lewis came up with a while ago. He came round with a copy of a writing magazine in which there was a poetry competition and suggested I might like to enter it. I’ll give it a go I thought, and then I realised it had to be written in a specific disciplined poetic form – terza rima.

I suspect we’ve all had a go at composing simple ‘haiku’ poems at school with their three lines of 7-5-7 syllables but this was something else altogether – something much more methodical.

Although it certainly took longer and endured many corrections and redrafts I finally came up with the following – I hope you feel the discipline paid off (2012)
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