our love became mechanical,
are transmitter fell to the ground,
the kisses turned to concrete, and
the hugs turned to steel, the moment
filled with money, the laughter filled
with spite, and a moment of silence,
for a love thats about to die...
Invest in EverReady Batteries. It will perk new life into this 'lifeless' charade! LSP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi David, It's very true, It is hard to be in a relationship. It takes a lot of work trust, honesty, sincerity and love. This is something I thing most relationships are lacking. No one seems to be together and after a certain age we become wary. Excellent poem, Great vivid imagery and emotions. Take care.