Wishing Won'T Get You Anywhere... Poem by Jeong Jung

Wishing Won'T Get You Anywhere...



If you did spot a star tonight,
I ask what would you do?
Would you sit and wish upon it.
and hope it would come true?

If you did blow your wishing flame,
I ask what would you do?
Would you just hope the flame would carry,
your wishes up in the blue?

If you did clasp a special locket,
I'd ask what would you do?
Would you yearn for things to happen,
and wait for a little clue?

I'd ask, what's wishing without trying,
Will your dreams and hopes come true?
If I were you, I wouldn't wait,
But act upon what I want to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Jemima 02 February 2008

a great message. it's one thing to dream but it's another to get out there and do something about it. [like writing poetry =D] great rhythm and theme [I ask what would you do? ]. keep it up!

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