With In Me Poem by joseph macquarrie

With In Me

Rating: 5.0


Scarlet lips as red as a rose,
perfect hips in a seductive pose.
On the outside this is what I may be,
but what about looking at the heart within me.

Long black hair, surrounding my face,
baby blue eyes and full of grace.
This is what most men chase,
but my soul and feeling cannot be erased.

Long, untouched legs with a snug fitting skirt,
a short and sexy tube top shirt,
I take my looks with little pride,
for what I care about is what's inside.

They say that these looks are a sensation,
that I am one of God's best creations,
But all I really want is for you to see,
all the good that is within me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shannon Monroe 14 January 2010

i love it.... it's exciting and it make me think of someone special and dear 2 me.... thank you...

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wild forest- E- 12 January 2010

good one! ! ! like...... definataly is a modivational peom for othere people not to look on the outside, but on the inside. keep up the great work! !

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this one is really good really creative. well done

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red rose of texas 15 December 2009

very good i like it and don't give up you will find someone

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Rachel Butler 29 October 2009

'But all I really want is for you to see' Rachel Ann Butler

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