Within Poem by Grace Galeon

Within

Rating: 5.0


What a beauty I see inside the shell
A stunning pearl but living in hell
Enclosed in darkness yet glows so bright
Hold it tight before it looses its light

Wednesday, December 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
You are not alone;
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 28 December 2017

Beauty lies within.. Nice rhyming

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 December 2017

Beautifully crafted write with great rhyme. Short piece but says a lot about depression.10

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