Without You Poem by Crystle Jones

Without You

Rating: 4.3


When I look into your eyes,
I see my entire life.
I just donno what i would do,
If anything ever happened to you.
Your my reason, for getting up in the mornin',
My reason for breathin', my reason for livin'

When I see you smile, everything else just seems to fade.
I dont think i would last,
Even for just one day.
I would follow you, anywhere you go.
But this im sure, you already know.

Take my hand.
Take me with you.
Show me a place that, I never knew.
But please dont leave me, all alone.
I wont survive, on my own.
I need you standin, by my side.
Cuz without you here, i would die.

I love you.
I need you.
Dont make me live...
Without you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahmari Thomas 16 July 2009

a very heartfelt poem that you have written.....please read one of my poems since i am a new writer...actually i jus wrote my first poem tonight...anyway beautifully written...yupperz

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Subroto Chatterjee 16 July 2009

Either ways, you'll survive. You must. Cheers. Subroto

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Keith Hendrickson 16 July 2009

very nice. its from the heart so that makes it even better. it doesnt seem forced and its very smooth. nice work

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Romeo Della Valle 24 July 2011

A heart touching love's confession honestly revealed to the World! I also like the flow in it. Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

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Nooruddeen Mm 10 October 2009

Cristle An Excellent love poem Beautifully narrated Good flow too. Congratulations Nooruddeen

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Angelic Warrior 04 September 2009

........speechless.....he is lucky to have such a loving woman by his side :) ......love it! 1000000000000000+++++++++: D

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Eyan Desir 22 July 2009

good write....top marks

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

Its an wow.....sweet poem.......words came out from heart's core! 10+

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