A Broken Life Poem by Crystle Jones

A Broken Life

Rating: 4.1


She sits in the corner cryin,
'N cuttin her pretty arm.
Thinkin about the world,
'N why its so wrong.

Reality is too much for her,
'N all she has is the pain.
She lives in a broken home.
Shes all alone,
'N shes goin insane.

Cuz shes crazy,
'N broken hearted.
Shes lonely,
'N the pain is driftin in.

She stares at the stars all night,
Hopin someone might here her,
Cries for some help, Some kind of savoir.
She hoped it wouldnt come down to this,
But she lives, in a world, with no happyness.

She sits there blinking her tears away,
Knowing that, One day they'll all pay.
For all the hate and agony,
All the pain and trechory.

She smokes untill, she is numb.
But once its gone, back all her feelings will come.
All the hate and agony.
All the pain and trechory.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

Pains in our life sometime play great role in our life to open new sweet door dear friend! well penned indeed! 10+

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

WOW! ! ! ! very very nice. the last 8 lines did it 4 me. even though it was a great piece top to bottom i loved the way you ended. very nice work. i cant wait to read more

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

Sweet I liked the flow of this poem keep writing my friend 10s

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Amadeus Conner 17 June 2009

I loved it as always!

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Amadeus Conner 17 June 2009

The grass is always greener on the other side ;)

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