Womansmudge Poem by Anais Nietzsche

Womansmudge

Rating: 5.0


she's just
a smudge;

a womansmudge.

he smudges her red lipstick
into the carpet

and her face
with it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 10 January 2007

A stark but real observation - its descriptive economy carries a devastating punch. Ivan

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Vonda Overlie 10 January 2007

Powerful. My mind wrote a whole story.... -Vonda

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Goldy Locks 10 January 2007

really appreciate the starkness of this, the color. & the fact that it is so disregarding. props, Sus.

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