Mark Dillon

Rookie - 33 Points (22/12/60 / Ireland)

Would It Really Matter - Poem by Mark Dillon

Would it really matter if we didn't get up today.
Didn't go to work and just stayed home to play.
If we just stood idly by and left the work undone
Cast away the chores and just went and had some fun.

Whoever set the precedence of working through the day
To come home jaded tired, exhausted from the fray.
Must have had a sad existence tied to the work ideal
just like running endless circles on the hamsters wheel.

All work and no play, the bills, they cripple and sometimes slay.
Those who don't take time to stop and say
'What about me, this is wrong'
Then go and have some wine and song.
To break the chains of work and toil
does the soul good every once in a while.

Would it really matter if we took a little time out,
to let our hair down and laugh, scream and shout.
Release all those frustrations and keep the beast in check.
'cause if we don't let off some steam,
we'll wind up a quivering wreck.

Comments about Would It Really Matter by Mark Dillon

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (8/18/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Congratulations! Really it deserves to be a Member Poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,945 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/18/2014 7:55:00 PM)

    it would be nice to just go do something fun without a care in the the idea and good poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,945 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/18/2014 7:55:00 PM)

    it would be nice to just go do something fun without a care in the the idea and good poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (8/18/2014 5:17:00 PM)

    Sounds good to me, the work ethic needs a little reconsidering methinks - but then there are those bills to pay! Very good Mark, well said. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 70,270 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/18/2014 12:35:00 PM)

    very beautiful, let our hair down and laugh.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 943 Points Stephen W (8/18/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    Well done indeed. Welcome to the Lazy Bones Revolution! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,927 Points Damian Murphy (8/18/2014 6:30:00 AM)

    Very good. I really enjoyed this, great rhythm and rhyme (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,087 Points Paul Reed (8/18/2014 2:35:00 AM)

    Enjoyed the poetry and the message (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,509 Points Lyn Paul (8/18/2014 12:32:00 AM)

    Great work Mark twice POD. Maybe this is telling Employers to G o easy on us poor hard workers. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,648 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (8/18/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    I simply loved this poem! That's what I am going to do tomorrow...Spend tomorrow just lazing around, enjoying myself...instead of rushing to office in a crowded metro on a Monday morning and getting back with strained nerves and an exhausted body (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,116 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/18/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Title first touch me to add a more sentence with this writing.....nothing would really be any matter if the earth stops its movement just this very moment................ And finally my comment is, its a nice poem by its approach, its used lucid words and the style of catching readers attention..... Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/18/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,509 Points Lyn Paul (8/18/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Well deserved Mark a great write. For this I grant you tomorrow off. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/18/2013 6:36:00 AM)

    congratulations Mark Dillon..I am happy to see you here..Keep it up.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Princess Lilypad (8/18/2013 12:51:00 AM)

    I stand by no verse form, four line verse, free flow, rap, whatever. I thought it was said in fine form and of worthy subject matter. good job. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 821 Points Ruth Walters (10/29/2012 3:28:00 AM)

    We're the worker bees, the drones and the 'queens' are the monied who don't have to work, however we hold power because without us the 'queens' would come unstuck, not just because they'd have no money, but because they'd have no food, no electricity or gas, no medical staff, no post, no cars, as we all know that these have to be made or brought in somehow, provided by the people for the people. Let's take our hats off to the little people, the worker bees! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (8/31/2012 12:59:00 AM)

    You let off steam Mark, don`t finish up a wreck, loved your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani (8/18/2012 8:27:00 PM)

    Wonderful. Yes. Your poems will really matter. Some more without slaying. Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (8/18/2012 7:50:00 AM)

    A fine poem that deserves all the good reviews. It might have been better to stick to a four line verse form in the
    third and fourth verses, but that`s just my personal opinion, and the most important is that you transported
    your message with poetic skill, good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,116 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/18/2012 1:25:00 AM)

    Again hears the voice of genius ancestors. Nothing would be matter if we go back to our life based on nature. And the contrast of life reveals well by words. If anyone get opportunity to live without his mechanical dailiness, the poet would have ti write the reverse. Actually human soul can not bear monotony at a stretch. Nice....Pranab k c (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 7, 2012

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