Would you?
Could you?
Tell me that-
you know...
Would you dare?
If you thought,
That I might-
You know...!
If it meant a 'yes' or 'no',
Would you do it?
'Cause chances are-
If you did...
You'd watch me go...
(1982 by Dee Daffodil H.W)
DEE...2 WORDS MY DEAR; YOU ROCK! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Once again...amazing poem! Such few words but said so well... Love, Valsa
You have placed the reader in the middle of a quandry and the feeling came straight across to us, like a rocket, whoooooooosh great job 10, without fail Love Duncan x
Don't know why I hadn't seen this one before. It has a Dr. Suess feel, but with a much deeper meaning/tension/implication to it. -c
Well, there ya go, that wonderful creative mind at work yet once again. You go girl.---Melvina---
Well, I'd hate to see you go... soooo, I guess I wouldn't. Cool poem, Dee! ! Brian
Yeah, knowing me I probably would! Seriously though, great poem - a masterful use of language. Hugs Anna xxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great read and a good interesting poem. Keep writing, Rissa: -)