Wrath Poem by Osvaldo Roman Cerda

Wrath

Rating: 4.5


This deadly sin, a powerful sin
Has conquered my spirit
I just sit to hate, loathe, and be envious
This sin has absolute dominion over me
My psyche is too much a salve, trapped in this
Wrathful abyss; full of Pandora’s demons
Ready to attack and kill
A vacant soul has fallen
To my haughty sin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 18 July 2008

I suppose this could have been written better, but it is hard to imagine it right now. This was just about right. I keep thinking there is something missing. Something intangible. That's why I gave it a 9. I'm just not sure. GW62

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Osvaldo Roman Cerda

Osvaldo Roman Cerda

Los Angeles, California
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