Yet Golden Night Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Yet Golden Night

Rating: 5.0


yet a new day yet with the eyes
like mingling of red to the wine
yet a shadow of dream freeble blue
flinching to the depth of the night.

a rave up yet of the golden night
as you see the light latching on to its gleam
wishing the moon as peppered by the time
like a day leaving its all shadows to the night.

.the love yet unfailing shelters winking stars
Yet bestowed upon as revered to the reason of soul
the love as unfettered by the wishes of the God.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 24 October 2007

A wonderful love...beautiful imagery

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Emancipation Planz 24 October 2007

This read is near perfect.... just one thing - 'from the peppered moon' I add 'the salt of the earth' as my dessert... one Peace at a Time, Deana

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Ewigi Liebe 24 October 2007

Dreamers seldom wake to find their dream come true....as future unfolds beyond the depth of all..all in one....words will never say enough...will leave them a legacy of love.

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

Yet bestowed upon as revered to the reason of soul Rachel Ann Butler

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, aryaindia 07 September 2008

The wishes of man is clothed in the shadow of blessings he is wrapped with with the good deeds he sheds on others' paths. Love can conquer all. regards, arya

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Cindy Velasquez 30 August 2008

I love the last two lines.: -)

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Linda Weischedel 11 January 2008

AWESOME POEM DOC! ! ! ! !

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Melvina Germain 11 November 2007

The love pours all over the earth for all to feel it's glory. The blue light of day and the golden light of night shine through and we all live within God's story. Once again, that's what I took from this brilliant poem Doctor. Another excellent write Doctor.--Melvina--

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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