You Poem by lorife tilbe

You

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I look at YOU wth spark.
Fr YOU r d’ brightest star,
While am only the moon.
Juz waiting fr ur light,
And make a shine upon me.

I look at YOU wth grace.
Fr YOU r d’ tallest tree,
While am only d’ land.
Juz waiting fr a ripe fruit to fall,
And make a new blossom plant on me.

I look at YOU wth love.
Fr my heart shouts ur name,
While my mind says stop.
Juz waiting fr d’ call,
And make a full of hopes within.

Bec. YOU r d’ man of my dreams.
The source of my strength,
Nor the core of my everything.
Nothing else to wish for,
No matter what, how, and why.
I will always choose YOU.
And so am proudly say......
I LOVE YOU my habibi, with all my soul.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
July 12,2013 at 1: 39am
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

A nice poem has been corrupted by unconventional abbreviations and abridgement of words.

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Efirol T. 02 September 2017

Thank you for your comment. Its been years since i last visited here. I guess am just too busy with my life. Anyhow, am planning to upload more poems I wrote during my absence. I am glad I can still open my account. ^___^

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Efirol T. 02 September 2017

Thank you for ur comment. Its been years since I last visited this account. I didnt know its still here as am busy with myself doing stuff for my so called 'career'. Anyhow, am glad i can still open my account. And bec of this, am soon planning to post more poems i created with my absence. hahaha Thank you! ! ! ^ ___^

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