Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 9,819 Points (Bangladesh)

You - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

It's always a pleasure to read your poems.
They usually come to me like pieces of gems.
They leave a lingering delight in my mind,
Of soft feelings, so soothing that's hard to find.
You are a poet of peace, of love and clarity,
A poet of pristine serenity and of beauty.
You are an admirer of nature,
Admirer of the fleeting seasons,
You enjoy the seasonal changes,
Without looking for good reasons.
You 'always carry a song in your heart',
And always appreciate all that's a fine art.
You love dancing, singing, songs and music,
Yourself can produce a magnificent lyric.
I love your poems, and love your thoughts,
As also the greetings of peace, quite a lot.


Dhaka
02 October 2013


Comments about You by Khairul Ahsan

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/26/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    @ Sandra Feldman,
    I am so glad that this poem of mine has been able to catch your eyes. As always, your high praise has inspired me a lot and this will go a long way in helping me improve my standards further.
    My sincere thanks! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 23,584 Points Sandra Feldman (10/26/2013 2:35:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful, poetical description of this anonymous poet who must be quite an unusual writer to have moved you so deeply. Your poem is wonderful, paints a vivid and emotional picture of the benefic and deep power of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/12/2013 1:06:00 PM)

    @ Aneesha Roy,
    Thanks for the comment..
    Good to know that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aneesha Roy (10/11/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    A lovely poem that tugs at the heartstrings and leaves a lingering smile on the face of the reader. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/10/2013 8:47:00 PM)

    @ Naida Nepascua Supnet,
    Thanks for your nice words.
    Yes, where the shoe fits!
    Smiles! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/10/2013 8:07:00 PM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,

    Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,689 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/6/2013 6:13:00 PM)

    I like the idea of this poem
    It is like where the shoe fits
    It is for the poet who fits the criteria,
    And I myself smiled reading it.
    Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 11:21:00 PM)

    @ Mary Forrester,
    Thanks for your comment. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    @Lonnie Taylor,
    Captivating? I am so glad to know that!
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 8:38:00 PM)

    @ Shahzia Batool,
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments. Such kindness inspires me a lot. Certainly I shall read your 'You' too.
    From your comment, I have learnt the second meaning of an 'apostrophe' and I want to thank you particularly for that too. This is how we can benefit from each other's treasure of words in this elegant forum. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    Cassie,
    Thanks for labeling it 'magnificent' (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    @ Aftab Alam Khursheed,
    Thanks for the nice comment. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/4/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    @ Lucifera Santez,

    Thanks for reading my poem and for the comment.
    The 'You' of the poem is one who aptly fits into the description, lol... :)) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 888 Points Mary Forrester (10/4/2013 6:24:00 AM)

    A nice poem, very touching Khairul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 888 Points Mary Forrester (10/4/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    A nice poem, very touching khairul. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 888 Points Mary Forrester (10/4/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    A nice poem, very touching khairul. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 888 Points Mary Forrester (10/4/2013 6:22:00 AM)

    A nice poem, very touching khairul. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points Shahzia Batool (10/2/2013 1:54:00 PM)

    Nice apostrophe and elegant presentation...the title attracted me because my title is also the same, though such coincidences are the part of this art of poetry...i like couplets for the skilful and meaningful rhythmic bondage...yes, peace is the only thing we all desire! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Cassandra Jasmine (10/2/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    Magnificent!
    'You are an admirer of nature,
    Admirer of the fleeting seasons,
    You enjoy the seasonal changes,
    Without looking for good reasons.'
    I enjoyed it very much. As Lucifera asked, who is it about? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/2/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    Greeting and praise peace peace - love wins that's all, what we call Amor vincit ommania thank (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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