You Poem by Vember Francisco

You

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Last night I had a dream
It was you
The you I used to know
So long I haven't seen your face
But I saw you last night
In my dreams
I felt it again
Your touch
Your voice
Your smile
The you I used to know
But I felt it again
The pain
The sadness
The longingness
It felt so real
I thought it was you
The you I used to love
But I woke up today
Not a single tear had fell
But the hurt is there
The pain I couldn't bare.

Friday, August 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: broken,dream,hurt,past,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Latest sad poem that i wrote about current relationship.
I can still recall
why i wrote, how it felt.
01/29/18
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2018

But I saw you last night In my dreams I felt it again Your touch Your voice Your smile- - - - the hurt is still there...... love and its mysteries and the dreams........a fine poem. tony

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Vember Francisco 25 August 2018

Absolutely, Love Mysteries and Dreams. Thank you for noticing! :)

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vember francisco 25 August 2018

Absolutely, Love Mysteries and Dreams. thank you for noticing! :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2018

Vember, such a well penned poem....10++++

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Vember Francisco 25 August 2018

thank you! :)

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