You Poem by Jordi Petersen

You



I think of you every other minute,
I look for you every long lonesome day.
All of my friends say that I shouldn’t
I wonder how life goes on day by day.

Why am I always thinking about you?
They ask me who you are, I say just friends
Even though my friends tend to say, “wait, who? ”
The story just always comes out and bends.

I can’t wait so see you when you come back.
It’s been FOREVER, wait, it’s been a week
That summer night was dark as coal (pitch black) ,
I’ll never for get your mom’s shriek.

When I think of love, I think about you…
And, “I’m lost”, it means that I’m not with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Smith 07 February 2009

Very nicely written, great flow and rhythm.

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