You Poem by sarah john

You



You said you loved me
You said you would never leave me
You promised you would always hold me
Then you lied.It all came down
You made my world upside down
You will fix it agian?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Walls 29 August 2006

I like the straight to the point punch of this poem. My only suggestion is the last word, and its spelling. Again, just a suggestion. Be well with words -John

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