Khairul Ahsan

You And Me

You and me,
Passed thirty years and three,
Through Spring and Winter, rain and shine,
Enjoyed our life, barely with a hint of a whine.

You and me,
Like birds on a tree,
Built our nest, with endless zest,
Hardly caring about taking some rest.

You and me,
Went on a spree,
To adorn our sweet little hut,
Not much knowing, what was what!

You and me,
Started a family,
Before realizing what could be,
The meaning of life, entwined, not free!

You and me,
While sipping tea,
Made our plans, like a bumblebee,
To gather pollen for 'our youngs to be'.

You and me,
In the days windy,
Have weathered many storms,
Wearing unpleasant crowns of thorns.

You and me,
Both heartily agree,
That we have lived our eventful life,
Singing a chorus, without much strife.

06 October 2013
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Submitted: Sunday, October 06, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 02, 2014


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Dedicated to my wife who bore with me thru' life's twists and turns,
For so many years, without a fuss, taking care of all my concerns.
Couldn't thank her enough for what she has done, from the day one,
It's just a small gesture, to appreciate the long run, with lots of fun!

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  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/25/2015 9:05:00 PM)

    @Khalida Bano Ali,
    Thank you for your kind appreciation of my poem. I am truly inspired.
    And thanks for selecting this poem for your first comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 261 Points Susmita Kumari (1/15/2015 8:58:00 PM)

    i love to hear about the voyage that couple who've been together since so many years and still now....together enjoying their life as much as they can..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,584 Points Patricia Grantham (12/13/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    Oh I really enjoyed this zesty write. Two people enjoying
    the years and love they shared. A beautiful poem of
    being together with the one that you love. Very sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,615 Points The Princess (10/28/2014 7:13:00 PM)

    What a beautiful tribute to your lucky she is to have an appreciative spouse! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Angelique'''' Rockwell (10/17/2014 6:19:00 PM)

    All that a life partner should be! Simply expressed and easily understood but the most difficult to find. Love and appreciation for her just being there through it all. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (9/30/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    A lovely, heart warming tribute to the many years of happy marriage that you and your wife shared. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,229 Points Amitava Sur (7/9/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    I wish that you and me should always be associated with a glee
    They always should hum and sing with a pleasing symphony. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/3/2014 12:41:00 AM)

    @Emma Field,
    Thanks for appreciating my poem and leaving your inspiring comment here. Truly inspired! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/3/2014 12:21:00 AM)

    @Mallika Achuthan Menon
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment there. I am inspired.
    Hope you will find time to read some more and offer some words as feedback. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emma Field (1/1/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    Love the poem: D
    You and me,
    While sipping tea,
    Made our plans, like a bumblebee,
    To gather pollen for 'our youngs to be'.

    You and me,
    In the days windy,
    Have weathered many storms,
    Wearing unpleasant crowns of thorns.
    I likke them words alot even though i love all the poem [3 thumbs up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 414 Points Mallika Achuthan Menon (12/4/2013 10:26:00 AM)

    Very nice poem!
    You and me
    Like birds on a tree
    Build our nest, with endless zest!
    I liked these lines a lot....And thanks for
    your valuable comments about my poem.Once again thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    @Sandra Feldman
    My heartfelt thanks and appreciation for this beautiful interpretation you have made of my narration-like poem. The poem has been beautified by your thoughtful words.
    '., and as the years go by one soul starts blending into the other and you become as one. ' molten metals blend?
    'The recounting of good moments and not so good ones is done in a very artful and touching way'
    Very kind. Thank you so much! (Report) Reply

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