You Broke Me Poem by Monica Paris

You Broke Me

Rating: 5.0


I swore I’d never fall.

But when I look into your eyes
I see your love for me.

I never thought
I’d feel this way again.

But you broke me.

My heart is open
the walls are down.

It used to be dead and quiet
now it beats with sound.

It’s yours for the taking
if you promise not to hurt me.

I swore I’d never feel
this way again.

But you broke me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 29 January 2010

A brilliant composition... Very beautiful way to surrender.. :) i guess i don't know the exact word but really i found it too good. And it's too good 'coz you wrote it with simple words instead of using complicated junks. Keep it up! ! : -)

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Scott Austin 16 December 2008

You have allowed the reader to feel your heart in these words you have expressed here, thank you for sharing the wonderful piece with us. Scott

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C T Heart 15 December 2008

heartfelt composition...Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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