You Feel Like Giving In Poem by Francis Duggan

You Feel Like Giving In

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To suicidal thoughts you feel like giving in
But the battle for life the best battle to win
The victims of suicides from the memory quick to fade
For them there is never a big street parade
For some time you have lived on the brink of despair
And you may feel that life to you is unfair
The roadways of life for you have been rough
And for many years you have been doing it quite tough
The will for to live is far stronger than the wish for to die
And those who tell you different believe their own lie
Far better times of you may well be ahead
And in truth anyone is not better off dead
So live for as long as you possibly can
And leave it to Nature to end your life span.

Monday, November 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from 'rhymeon'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2018

Very profound, Francis!

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