We are parallel in a journey
You are judge I am performer
I do action you do testing.
I am not attached in matters.
You teach values at each time
And love you give eternally
You greet me at each second
In my each beat I greet you.
Very nice our relationship is
This is eternal on trust pillar
Greeting mind and spirit is nice
As this morning greets us all.
You sing and I sing for you
I adore you, you recognize me
By your wisdom only I live
Your eternal love strengthens.
Mutual greetings in parallel journey we see and feel in your poem. This poem is very lovely.
Our life should be a journey with the Almighty! When there is regular communion with God, our lives will be filled with love and joy. God's love is at once empowering, strengthening and comforting! The underlying message of the need to live in close relationship with God is so inspiring!
picture of Elizabeth Squires xWonderful piece! Thanks for sharing. 16 Jan 2016 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Al Thomas xMind, body, spirit... Yoga poem, union. Great words spoken. Thanks for posting 16 Jan 2016 by Al Thomas | Reply picture of laura loveheart xAwesome writing, tfs, [3 16 Jan 2016, by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery nicely penned 16 Jan 2016 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xFine work dear Kumarmani. Thank you for sharing. 16 Jan 2016 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Mizzy.. xVery inspiring write......lovely share! 16 Jan 2016 by Mizzy.. | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xDeep penning, lovely read, thank you for share! 17 Jan 2016 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of World of Colour xYou capture these emotions so purely that the reader is hooked from the opening line 17 Jan 2016 by World of Colour | Reply picture of Bipin Churchung Rabha xNice one! Tfs. 18 Jan 2016, by Bipin Churchung Rabha | Reply picture of laura loveheart xA perfect relationship, lovely poetry, tfs, [3 20 Jan 2016 by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Keith Labonte xgreat poem, good sir 26 Jan 2016 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xBeautiful and inspiring! Tfs xoxoxo blessings darling xoxoxo xoxoxo 4 Mar 2016 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply
nice one...10 love foreach other living with some offers life is an aexapmple for all people
Very strong poem on the subject we are parallel and we both follow each other..wonderful poem.10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The gifts of life! Wisdom is the key. Nice work.