You & I Poem by Khirod Dalpati

You & I



YOU & I

I survive here somewhere
In a corner of the world,
You remember there somewhere
In the corner of the world.
You feel as you are left
All alone as I feel
I remember you and think
If you remember me still.
You see the full moon which
Lies just above my head,
I remember all the words
Which you have said.

You talked about the
Sun, moon and stars above,
Till they will survive
Will survive our love.
When you see the moon
You may think of few,
When I see the moon
I just think of you.
For friends were we
And friends may not be,
For I know I can't see you
And you can't see me.

By: Khirod Dalpati

Monday, September 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. Deserves full mark 10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2017

when you went abroad you did make friends it seems another day another time another moon soon will be with both her and thee take it easy she has gone with the wind!

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Khirod Dalpati 01 October 2017

Ha ha ha... Thank you for your comments.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2017

Nice poem.. reminds me of the song YOU AND I popularized by KENNY ROGERS....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2017

The title suits it best, Khirod..... Keep up the good work.....

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Khirod Dalpati 19 September 2017

Thank You Sir, I have given the title after writing the poem. I hope it suits.

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