You Is Me Poem by Bassam Takatkah

You Is Me

Rating: 4.8


when sun sets, I remember you, and when rises too.
you are in the mind, where captured by an idea or view.
just not forgotten the birds when flying in blue....
life seems up in me, like nothing before
and death is a divided area but not anymore....
because I rule that area with that love, so admired of you...
eternity is you. in you... by you.... to you..... sail to canoe

Forgive me for that wasted time without thinking of you and me…
As you is me … as you is me… in blood circulating
Hence in soul building up your image clear without fluctuating
Breathing you, your whispering internally in my realm seems …. Like …
Forests in sounds living for long coincide alike …….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a beautiful passionated rising sunny poem..beautifully expressed...10+++

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The People's Poet 13 May 2009

Congratulations: you know what Love really is. Fantastic stuff.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

A poem on deep love. Love it with 10.

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