You Just Took Your Life Poem by Zac Williams

You Just Took Your Life

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You just took your life.
You just took your life.

Only God knows how you feel
The pain you had was always real.
No matter how much you tried
You just took your life

Im going to write for you
To keep you alive
Even though you did this to end your pain
I'll be here to fulfill the blame

Close your eyes, It's O.K.
They will live for the day

You just took your life
Somehow i know
They'll stand strong
And try hard not to cry

Knowing you without knowing you at all
I'll keep my ground as this falls.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 11 February 2007

You paint a very sad picture, it's a sad day when someone feels the only way out is to take their life. Suicide is one of the hardest situations to deal with for the family & friends left behind. Excellent poem---Melvina---

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