You Only ''Think'' You'Re Hiding Poem by Mary Nagy

You Only ''Think'' You'Re Hiding



I know you think you're hiding
and you can go ''unseen''
but, let me say I know you're there
and that I know you're mean.

Just focus on your own life
don't concern yourself with mine.
If you are such a ''treasure''
you should be doing fine.

Why give me such attention
yet act like you don't care?
Don't think you're really hiding...
HELLO! I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 21 January 2006

This was just a little note for a ''special someone''........they know who they are. :) Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 21 January 2006

I like this Mary....alot of force behind yet so simple. Like you're telling someone off with a smile...lol! !

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Duncan Wyllie 12 February 2006

Too many of us are at this stage, I feel that as we get older we may have learned much more about ourselves and others.Great Poem Love Duncan

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Uriah Hamilton 21 January 2006

You deserve kind attention, I hope you're not getting negative attention! !

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Ernestine Northover 21 January 2006

Yeh, you tell it out Mary, uncover 'whoever'' it is and show em! One of your great writes again. Love Ernestine XXX

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Alice Vedral Rivera 21 January 2006

Mary, you have such a way with words and rhyme. It's delightful to read even though you're actually chastising someone. avr

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Rusty Daily 21 January 2006

Mary, I hope you aren't undergoing a problem from someone on Poemhunter. If you are, please go to administration and get it solved. Rusty

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