I know you think you're hiding
and you can go ''unseen''
but, let me say I know you're there
and that I know you're mean.
Just focus on your own life
don't concern yourself with mine.
If you are such a ''treasure''
you should be doing fine.
Why give me such attention
yet act like you don't care?
Don't think you're really hiding...
HELLO! I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!
I like this Mary....alot of force behind yet so simple. Like you're telling someone off with a smile...lol! !
Too many of us are at this stage, I feel that as we get older we may have learned much more about ourselves and others.Great Poem Love Duncan
You deserve kind attention, I hope you're not getting negative attention! !
Yeh, you tell it out Mary, uncover 'whoever'' it is and show em! One of your great writes again. Love Ernestine XXX
Mary, you have such a way with words and rhyme. It's delightful to read even though you're actually chastising someone. avr
Mary, I hope you aren't undergoing a problem from someone on Poemhunter. If you are, please go to administration and get it solved. Rusty
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This was just a little note for a ''special someone''........they know who they are. :) Mary