You'Re Sweet Poem by Summer Song

You'Re Sweet

Rating: 4.5


The bright pink flowers
and rasberry hearts
the juicy reality
that always spreads
Buttercream icing
on neon bicycles
we ride and become diamonds
on disco balls
wrapped in
fruit leather blankets
and a secret world
and suddenly I forget the days
when I wasn't your girl

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 13 April 2012

the phrasing of the poem is very nice and the ending of the poem is very dramatic which i like.....a very good write..........................keep writing.....

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