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Each day you wake up with a frown
Rumours keep spreading around town
That you're suffering a mental breakdown
A solitary walk you walk
A lonely talk you talk
As you wander as a lonely
You wander as a lonely at night
You wander as a lonely on sight
You wander as a lonely at day
You wander as a lonely and pray
You wander as a lonely each day
Slow down, slow down
Shut down, shut down
Shutdown the lonely before you drown
Embrace your friends with warmth
They can give you assistance
Deliver you from your lonely existence
You keep fighting love
Bending it around like a curve
With your glowering face
Reserving only a lonely place,
Halting happiness to arrive in your life
Do you ever stop to wonder?
Do you ever stop to ponder?
Are you the reason for the lonely blunders?
Slow down, slow down
Shut down, shut down
Remove from your head that lonely crown
You wander endlessly as a lonely
Searching for a spot called homely
But your face is missing that vital smile called lovely
Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi
www.sylviachidi.com
Check out my latest 'Justice & If I were a girl'
Sylvia Chidi
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Friday, March 31, 2006 |
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Thursday, November 20, 2008 |
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Melvin T (1/11/2009 7:13:00 AM)
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An exceptional poem, very meaningful and i like the structure too
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Ahmad Saqer (12/2/2008 7:17:00 PM)
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' Deliver you from your lonely existence
You keep fighting love
Bending it around like a curve
With your glowering face
Reserving only a lonely place,
Halting happiness to arrive in your life '
perfect, Sylvia
thnx
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Mithzi Silva (9/17/2008 8:49:00 PM)
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i love it..its perfectly sad
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Dolan Doran (7/27/2008 12:58:00 PM)
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wow. that is totally me..I love it. It's so sad and yet is soo beatuiful. I really love it.
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Pat Diaz (2/11/2008 10:48:00 AM)
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Its a sad but beautiful poem at the same time i really like it
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Terra Somroka (5/12/2006 1:02:00 PM)
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you know, i admit, that poem describes me perfectly, he, he, good job on this one Sylvia.
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