Young Chickens Poem by Paul Butters

Young Chickens

Rating: 4.5


These balls of fluff, so small and light,
They make a sweet and delicate sight.

With tiny beaks and dewdropp eyes,
And stalky legs on clutching toes,
Soft chickens chirp and shake,
While mother keeps them safe from foes.

My sister's hands, uncertain, flicker-
Take hold afraid a one-day chick;
Such vices that could snap its twiggy ribs
Or mangle wings like petals
If startled by a stalky flutter.

These bright, shimmering, shivering balls of sun,
Like magnificent tigers, grand yet near extinct,
They shame the work of man.

For what can he create?
A glittering palace of steel and concrete and soot,
Which crumbles, black, to strew the sterile earth with slag.

Self-seeding grass retakes the rubble jigsaw!
The carcass of man's mortal mark,
Once left,
Is dust in nature's wake.

See spring now banish the death of winter,
As leaf-clouds billow from tree-trunk spikes,
Puffed like a yacht's wind-filled sail.

Above, great white clouds cruise on a crystal film,
On the surface of a great waveless ocean.
Beyond, rests the dome of the sky,
Pure blue,
Broken only by the radiant sun.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Originally inspired by a holiday on a smallholding near Morecambe when I was a kid.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 08 October 2008

Damn gorgeous. It strengthened in imagery almost as if you made it that way.? ? The final stanza's descriptives are sublime. HG: -) xx

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The title made me (me with my filthy mind n all) think of something different and so of course I had to read and... I am so, so glad I did..... humbled. You reawake things, P, first and foremost, appreciation. t x

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Marc Mannheimer 29 October 2007

Wonderful! A subject matter I might write about, but not a talent in description I could reach - for now.

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Paul Butters

Paul Butters

Leeds, West Yorkshire.
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