Your Attention God! ! ! Poem by Siddartha Montik
Your Attention God! ! !
Hope you, You God, that you remember you made us Humans,
like all creatures and mammals!
We Humans so, yet, left the Path of Nature Some where,
we stored food and made ourselves Kings and went so rude!
We made many wars..., know not why, and killed,
Only had that witness of Blood that we spilled!
Yes then we found things for our way..,
we made something called Money,
yet we only have to live eating what you made from nature's way!
We made many a borders but can not stop any birds across,
we made Visas and papers as we do not see hearts and we miss all!
Damn we, we made rules and fails and made something(s) ,
and call it 'International day(s) of this and that,
He and She, that and this.. for all our Guilt(s) !
Save Us GOD, it is time for your attention,
we are just on the verge of Making in Quick,
'International day of Right Click and left Click'!
Oh No! ! Stop us GOD! !
we look at you God, for your attention! ! !
copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)
As noted by the poet, humans are a creation of God. If that is the case, the flaws inherent in human beings could only have emanated from the source of humans. It should be noted that man was not created perfect, and not meant to be perfect. What other commentators have referred to as human problems, human insanity, how bad we have made out world, etc is probably the way God intended this world to be. God is all powerful and all knowing. It would therefore be safe to say that at the point of creating man, he knew the world will turn out to be like this, and he did not change it. All in all, I believe this poem needs more work. The logic is faulty and the religious undertones are too loud. As it is, it is more of a religious recitation than a poem.
We Humans so, yet, left the Path of Nature Some where...this where we humans have made our greatest mistake. God help us..Well written poem
You Dear Poet struck at the Point, the Greatest Mistake we Humans did!
" We made many wars..., know not why, and killed, Only had that witness of Blood that we spilled! " I bet if only the Leaders of countries fought for their countries, wars would end. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Well crafted and expressed... Mankind have strayed from the path. You poured out your heart into your ink
Amen Siddartha, beautiful truth, yet to some its painful truth...so many people are in denial of the mess and sin we do every day, I remember the Bible mention that evil will increase, every time we think we getting wise, the more sinful we become, thanks for writing such a needed call.
" We made many a borders but can not stop any birds across, we made Visas and papers for we do not see hearts as we all miss" Well penned poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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' we made many a borders but cannot stop any birds across'- liked these lines. To be free like a bird is a dream.