Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 504 Points (Washington State)

Your Golden Pen - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes
...Entranced and in total bliss...
Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp
...Energized by your heavenly kiss...

We two are as a gift package
...Gift papered and tied with silk bow...
A grand presentation of sheer quality
...Of the sweet you that i have come to know...

...And in the background, playing...
...An Aussie Minstral and his music men...
Continue this moods amazing altruisms
...With a: 'Giving Melody'-written with your...
Golden Pen!


Comments about Your Golden Pen by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Gold Star - 5,222 Points Tushar Ray (3/24/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    Excellent poetic expression of emotion, affection and love! Very enjoyable! (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 12,641 Points Ramesh Rai (8/11/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    Written with your golden pen.
    Entangled in the depth of
    your blue eyes
    ...Entranced and in total
    bliss...
    Embraced by your circled
    arms tight grasp
    ...Energized by your heavenly
    kiss....Perfectly soothing and enchanting. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,534 Points Amitava Sur (6/20/2014 9:25:00 AM)

    A very pleasant mood is drawn which enchants the mind..... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 504 Points Theodora Onken (10/3/2009 6:05:00 PM)

    Patricia, thank you so ver much for your very kind words.
    Many blessings to you.
    Theo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 381 Points Patti Masterman (10/3/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    This is just beautiful, Theodora. Glad I noticed you. Your poem perfectly is matched with a beautiful Fall day. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 504 Points Theodora Onken (8/20/2007 4:07:00 AM)

    L, A, M, P, And M, Thank you all so very very much!
    Theo (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,394 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (8/20/2007 3:27:00 AM)

    It's been a while since I've observed your style with such magificent classiness...
    Ms Theo, you drive me wild! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (8/20/2007 2:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful write Theodora, good to have you back again lady... Andy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Buhagiar (8/20/2007 2:53:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Theodora. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Poison 9901 (8/20/2007 2:49:00 AM)

    I to agree with Melvina, very nice.
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melvina Germain (8/20/2007 2:42:00 AM)

    A truly beautiful poem written with your golden pen Theo, I love this little treasure.
    --Melvina-- (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 30, 2011


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