Your Love Song Poem by Aldo Kraas

Your Love Song

Rating: 3.0


Your love song that
You sang out
For your girl friend
Left her in tears
The tears from
Her eyes
Kept falling
Like dripping
Faucets
Every word
In your love
Song
Had been written
By you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 11 September 2007

your song will wipe the tears, And through the blinding tears Smile shall breakout In rainbow colours! do continue.........

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It's not finished? Then ye gods Aldo, you're right. t x

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Aldo Kraas 05 September 2007

This poem is going to be a good one when it is going to be finished

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poetry lover 05 September 2007

Very lovely, please continue

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