Z(Haiku) Springtime Poem by Alice Cuenca

Z(Haiku) Springtime

Rating: 5.0


torrential rainfall
dead earthworms on the pavement
slushing sound of wheels

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 August 2008

in between the first and the last line the earth worms lie dead, very meaningfully...wheels on the pavement- adds to poetic beauty...

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