(! ! ! !) Falling Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! ! ! !) Falling

Rating: 2.9


...of the clearing
of the trees
a leaf, sustain
the load of sorrow

silent and penetrating,
he who holds the glass
that bends the sunlight
somewhere...
multifaceted.
turning away
from my direction

the growing hours
of the silent autumn wind
carries the incandescent hues
impressed on a leaf.
a memory. falling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ric Bastasa 04 October 2009

puling... ang mata napuling... back to writing candice, superb poem..a ten

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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

Really enjoyed this; was sad to reach the end..(smile)

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Ena N. Mori 27 March 2010

I love the aura of your writing style. Very tactful selection of metaphors! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems!

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Mifael Llauderes 12 October 2009

lt's calming, nevertheless... just paying a visit.

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Antonio Liao 11 October 2009

a hope that holds the clouds.....to reach the destiny that waited for.... thou....in a state of falling it rise to the pendulum to stay.... a courage of the dawning day to come...thank you my friend for sharing this wisdom of waiting and standing to walk again...God bless....a 10 +++++

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Aziz Alkaabi 07 October 2009

Well done, Kandis, i can almost grab that leaf.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

fine image created! nice wording! 10+

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